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I miss you
Being so far away
Canít wait for the day
That I see you again

Time stands still
Waiting for you
If only you knew
How your smile makes me feel

I miss you
Hearing your laughter
I wish time went by faster
So I could see you again
This is a poem I wrote for someone who wanted me to find them a romantic poem about missing someone, but devoid of the word love. I looked on the internet for one that I could give him but they didn't sound right so I decided to write one for him. *shurg*
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D-Iulia Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
Love it :love:
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MsShindig Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
exactly how i feel whenever im not by his side...
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DarkLinkRules Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
This describes exact how I feel! There's this guy I like, and I just don't wanna wait till next school year to see him again!
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Rijp Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
This tells my feelings right now. I miss him so much. I hope that he would hug me tightly, be by my side and say that he likes me.
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dragonbright Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011
Exactly how I feel right now. I'm here in MN and my boyfriend is in coast guard stationed in Cali and I haven't seen him since July. I miss him terribly and can't wait to see to him in June when I'm road trippin out there to see him.
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izzymabizzy Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
AMAZING.. :D
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vampireknightfan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
So beautiful. Making my heart melt with the shards of pain there darling. I miss my boyfriend so very much, plus he is on the other side of the world.
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FerardForever21 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009
This is how I feel now. My boyfriend' is far away and I won't c him for another 3 days. Great job btw!!
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rideaseeker629 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
This is exactly how I'm feeling rite now. I miss my fiancee, but he gets to spend two nights with me soon.
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kearstidbz Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2008   Writer
I am glad you like it! Thanks for the fav!
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